Friday, May 31, 2024

BOOK: Raymond Layton, Man of Mystery by Carol Ann Kauffman






American agent Gina Belcanto must take desperate measures
to ensure nothing stands in the way of her inheriting her grandfather's ranch in Oklahoma, even if it means marrying the mysterious Raymond Layton.

International intrigue. Terrorist pods. Counterfeiting on a global scale. Secret records in Sicily.

Old boyfriend Brian is at a complete loss to understand the situation. And now he's on the run with nowhere to hide. Where will he go? To Gina.





 Amazon Link: https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0B7FC5YST

Available in kindle format, paperback, and Vella.


Excerpt:

 

Chapter One

Red Eye Out

 

 

“Brian, I’m leaving on the red eye,” Gee said softly as she leaned up against the edge of his desk. “I’m getting out of here today. I’m going home. It’s the last plane back to the States this week.”

“So, I heard. Connie and Tasha are terribly upset.” He stared out the window. “And so am I. I hate to see you go. You know that. I’ll miss you.”

“Then don’t miss me. Come with me. This operation is falling apart. The unit’s been defunded. Our cover’s blown. The Russians are sniffing around outside our door.”

“You don’t know that for sure, Gee,” said Brian. “Maye they’re new residents or just visiting the area.”

“While taking their machine guns out for a little walk? No. It’s trouble, I can feel it. The locals are scared.  They’ve have pulled all their support. We have no security. We’re sitting ducks. 

“Montevia is no longer safe place for any of us. We’re on our own here. You need to get out now, too.” 

Gee reached for his hand and squeezed it tightly. “Please, Brian. Don’t be so stubborn. You’ve got to get out of here. Now.”

“That’s very good advice. But I have no other options. Nowhere to go.”

“No family anywhere? Even distant family? Great auntie who loves you? Second cousin? Grandma’s second cousin? ”

“Nope. Haven’t grown any new family since the last time we had this discussion.”

“New girlfriend, maybe?”

“Nope. I’m still hung up on my old one, you know, the one who left me.”

“Brian, don’t. Not now.” She pulled her hand away.

“So, I guess I’ll stick it out here to the bitter end. I’ll take my chances that they’ll keep their word and send somebody to get us home safely.”

“I don’t like those odds. It’s too dangerous.”

 

“I’ll be fine, Gee. Your worries about my safety are completely unfounded. I’m invisible. Nobody sees me. I blend into the environment, my surroundings, the woodwork. I’m not valuable enough to murder. Tech guys, we’re a dime a dozen.”

“That’s not true. You’re so much more than a tech guy. You’re…” she sighed. “I hope you’ll reconsider. Be extremely careful. If you must stay here a little while longer, please watch out for sweet Boris and Magda. Encourage them to leave the city. Maybe farther out into the country would be safer for them.  I know they don’t want to go back to Belarus, but it’s a powder keg here.”

“I’ll do what I can, but there are no safe places anymore. The world is ready to explode. What we’re doing is simply putting band-aids on booboos. We’re treating the symptoms and ignoring the cause, the root of the disease, the major reason for all this international turmoil.”

“Don’t go getting all political on me, Brian.”

“You still don’t believe me, do you?”

“No. Maybe. I don’t know.”

“I’ve examined all the data. I’ve analyzed the situation. We are in for one major international shit storm.”

“All the more reason to get out of here.” She handed him a slip of paper. “And you do have an option. Me. Here’s my new contact information in the States. It’s out in the middle of nowhere, safe from all major shit storms. If you do manage to get yourself out of here in one piece, come find me. Don’t hesitate to call me.”

“Oh, really? And the new husband, you know, Raymond, the mystery man you left me for? He won’t mind if your old boyfriend shows up at the front door asking for you?”

“Raymond? No, not at all. Come. Seriously. We need to talk.”

“Take care of yourself, Gee. Stay safe. Don’t take any chances.”

“You either, sweetie.” Gee smiled at him as she left the room.

 

Brian unfolded the note and read.

Gina Belcanto. Prairie Breeze, Oklahoma. Contact Binky at Binky’s Bar on the corner of Main and State St. He’ll get you to the ranch.

Gina Belcanto? I’ve always known her as Geen Bell. 

Oklahoma? I never would’ve guessed the New York City girl would settle down in Oklahoma,” he said to no one in particular. 

The ranch. “It must be the husband’s place.” Brian folder the paper and put it in his pocket. “Raymond,” he snarled. 

Later, Brian saw Gee leave the building with the small standard-issue personal effects box in her hand, heading toward the parking lot. 

An elderly couple approached her. It was Boris and Magda. Their apartment bordered the back parking lot. Gee loved this old pair. She often had dinner with them. Sometimes they cooked together. They watched old American movies together and talked about the advantages of living a simple life in the country. She brought them tiny treasures from the store, things they had never seen, or food they never tasted. 

He watched out the window as they hugged and waved as she walked to her black rental car, put the box on the back seat floor, and slid gracefully into the driver’s seat. As she pulled away, she glanced back at his window, blew him a kiss, and waved to him.

Brian plastered himself against the window, hand firmly pressed to the glass, ready to cry. 

Was she aware he was watching her this whole time? 

How embarrassing… and desperately sad. How he would have loved to spend more time with her. His ex-girlfriend was the warmest, smartest, funniest person he ever met, as well as a highly skilled agent. And so beautiful. She was also now married, but not to him.








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Thursday, May 30, 2024

TV TIME:Ticket to Paradise (Prime Video)



 I really didn’t expect much from this. Lately, Hollywood’s favorite 
Plot is a mediocre rom-com script, high powered stars, and a lovely location. All these elements are to be found in Ticket to Paradise.

However, this one was more than slightly entertaining. And funny.















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Wednesday, May 29, 2024

INTERVIEW: Historical Fiction Author Nils Visser


Nils Visser

Brighton, East Sussex

United Kingdom 

 


Good morning, Nils, and welcome to Vision and Verse. What have you written?


Seven novels and five novellas, some of them taking place in the same worlds, such as my Sussex smugglers series or the paranormal Wyrde Woods series. Added to that, a myriad of historical magazine articles and more short stories than you can shake a stick at

 


What is your favorite genre to write?


A commonality is historical fantasy. The fantasy elements tend to be subtle. I like grounding the stories in nitty-gritty reality, using well-researched historical or socio-cultural contextsI prefer hinting at fantastical elements, trusting readers to decide for themselves if certain matters were real or part of the protagonist’s imagination. That fits within the magical realism tradition.

 


How old were you when you started writing?

 

I gave it a shot in my early twenties but looking back I didn’t have much of a clue as to what I was doing. It’d be best if that early stuff never saw the light of day again. Much later, when I was 39, I started writing articles for historical magazines. These did well, they were published in the USA, the UK, AustraliaGermany, France, and the Netherlands. Having done that for five years, I picked up the old dream of writing fiction again in 2014, aged 44. Been at that for ten years now and it’s unlikely I'll stop anytime soon. 

 


What motivated you to start writing fiction?

 

I was in a rough place, really struggling with my mental health. I wasn't getting any help that I trusted in, so literally wrote myself out of it. A matter of control, possibly? There wasn’t much I could control in the real world at that time, but there were worlds where I was master and commander for a brief time. 

 



Where do you get your inspiration?


It’s a fusion of things. Rottingdean Rhyme, for example, originated during a walk in Rottingdean with former resident Rudyard Kipling’s A Smuggler's Song dancing about in my mind

 

Five and twenty ponies, trotting through the dark, brandy for the Parson, ‘baccy for the Clerk, laces for a lady; letters for a spy...

 

Add visits to tiny museums in small seaside towns and local folklore, and presto, a smuggler's tale is born. Or reborn. Folklore, to my mind, is a living, breathing thing, forever developing. Not something etched in stone. I’ll happily beg, borrow, or steal, and then refashion, adding to the tradition.  

 


How about inspiration for your latest work, The Flying Dutchman: Bleak Future? That involved a bit of stealing, didn't it?

 

Indeed! Five years ago I discovered that my great-grand-uncle, Piet Visser, was aprolific Dutch writer, penning 21 books between 1900 and 1930. That was a special moment to be sure, it felt like receiving a legacy, a literary inheritance as it were. I really felt I had to do something with that. But I write in English and a great many of his books covered iconic Dutch history, unlikely to be recognised outside of the Netherlands. His De Vliegende Hollander, however, offered perspective. Who hasnt heard of the Flying Dutchman? 

 

Captain van der Dekken, howling defiance at the Almighty and sailing into a storm, wasnt it?

 

Ah, but thats the English tradition, more recently hijacked by Hollywood for the Pirates of the Caribbean series. Vissers captain waPeter Haelen. The tale has quite a pedigree that starts with Dutch Captain Bontekoes ships journal that was published in 1646 and was a bestseller at the time, being reprinted no less than 70 times. The journal saw a revival in the mid-1850s. Amongst others, Alexandre Dumas (of The Three Musketeers fame), wrote a novella called Bontekoe that was published in his Les Drames de la Mer in 1852. 

 

Another author fascinated by Bontekoe was the German author Philipp Korber. Heused his knowledge of the 1646 journal to write a novel called Der Fliegende Hollander that was published in 1849Its quite possible that Korber was also cashing in on the enormous popularity of Richard Wagners Flying Dutchman opera, which premiered in 1843Korbers book was translated into Dutch in the 1870s.Around 1900 my great-grand-uncle was asked to rewrite Korbers story for a Dutch audience. His De Vliegende Hollander was first published in 1901, with reprints in 1910, 1918 and 1927. I read botKorber and Vissers books in 2018 and thought another rewrite was in order. That turned into a trilogy, the first part of whichBleakFuture, was published in 2022.

 


That is a lot of history!

 

Aye, indeed. I’d apologise for the deluge of informationbut I’m rather proud of being at the tail end of a long tradition. Its a story that’s been 376 years in the making!

 

Why did you think a rewrite was in order? Did you change a lot? 

 

liked the concept introduced by Korber and further expanded by Visser, namely that of Peter Haelen as a misunderstood genius, whose exceptional shipbuilding skills were mocked and scorned, driving him to insanity. I think the frustration of being misunderstood is something most people can identify with. But to a modern reader the books seem hopelessly old-fashionedThe first fifth of Vissers book, a humongous first chapter, is an info dump relating Peter Haelens background story. Visser collected all the information relayed by Korber and then elaborated on it. The story proper doesnt really start until the second chapter. Ive read both works and its obvious where Visser is retelling the Korber part, and where hes off on his own. In the latter case the story becomes far more readablebut there are two very distinctive and contrasting author voices at work. 

 

There are other shortcomings. To begin with, men and boys werenexpected to experience or show emotions back in 1901. Peter Haelens descent from sanity to insanity is dealt with in one brief sentence. And then he went completely insane. Just like that, a total reversal of character without further ado. I suspect that a sharp decline in mental health, and the process leading to that, is precisely the sort of psychological content a modern reader would be interested in.

 

To continue with gender constrictions, there are barely any females in the book. Therean innkeeper, Greet Kals, whocliché but truly a delightful gem. Youve probably met her, as shea spitting image of Madame Thenardier from Victor HugoLes Miserables. Visser was a shameless thief, it turns out, making it far easier for me to justify stealing his work! The only other female is a young girl, Peter Haelens cousin Lotje, whos not otherwise described or given an age. She appears on a handful of pages only. Her sole role is to revive her father with smelling salts and to cry out: How fortunate we are that a manly hero has come to save us! Shes duly saved by Peter and then simply disappears out of the story.

 

An old-fashioned damsel-in-distress.

 

Indeed, but saviour of an author-in-distress! I seized upon Piet Visserlack of interest in the cousin and the fact that she was a blank page, open to (re)invention. In Bleak FutureLotje becomes Liselotte and her application of smelling salts becomes an intuitive understanding of healing skills. Her appropriation of the primary protagonists role allows me to leave Korber and Vissers Peter Haelen as intact as possible, his backstory one to be discovered by Liselotte, and his mental demise a process she observes (and tries to halt).

 


So sheyours?

 

If I tried to make such a claim, shed either shoot me with her crossbow or stab me with her Javanese dagger.

 

Feisty, is she?

 

I hesitate to use that description, because to me that suggests the creation of a strong femalprotagonist simply by dressing a woman in breeches and attributing a lot of traditionally male characteristics. Liselotte starts out very vulnerable and unsure of herself, painfully aware that 17th century society doesnt have a high opinion of women. Legally, shes the possession of her father or senior male family members until a husband becomes her ownerThat offers immediate friction and conflict to work with. Circumstances then force her into a position where she has trepeatedly rise to the occasion, and to her own surprise shes remarkably good at it. Shes far more confident at the end of the book, but once shemade it out of an unpredictable warzone, back to safety, shes expected to conform to societys restraints again. Will she? Youll have to read Bleak Future to find out.

 

And more on the way?

 

Part Two is called Malign Shadows, which Im working on now. The third part will be called Infernal FateAs for the end, well, everyone knows what happened to the ship that is to become The Flying Dutchman. The question is, how did they get there? Similarly, the fate of Peter Haelen, as captain of the phantom ship, can be confidently guessed at. But how will the curse impact on Liselotte

 

Why did you choose to include illustrations in Bleak Future? Those tend to be associated with children’s books.

 

Yes, they do and Bleak Future is not intended for young readers, but this is my Tevye the Milkman moment where I fling my arms in the air and holler Tradition!Bontekoes journal had illustrations. Alexandre DumasBontekoe had illustrations. Korbers Der Fliegende Hollander had illustrations. Piet VisserDe Vliegende Hollander had illustrations. It seemed apt to continue with that tradition. I was very lucky that Hastings based artist Julie Gorringe was willing to provide them. We arranged that she would read the chapters one by one and that she, not I, would decide what to illustrate. I very much came to look forward to receiving new ones, not knowing what Julie had chosen to illustrate. Moreover, being only a few chapters ahead of her at the best of times, her illustrations really helped shape story and characters as it grewBy now, I consult her frequently for Malign Shadows, absorbing (stealing!) her ideas as well as mine. 

 



Who is the one person who has influenced your personal life

the most and why?

 

My mother. She taught me to love books and the need for meaningful female protagonists in a world full of male heroes. 

 


If you could sit down and have a conversation with ONE

person, living or dead, real or fictional, who would it be and

why?

 

Piet VisserIt would be fascinating to exchange ideas with him, though we would probably argue. 

If it could be two, then Philipp Korber as well. He got my respect with the opening sentence of Der Fliegende HollanderIn defiance of convention, he starts with It was a dark and stormy morning. I might have to steal that. 

 


Do you listen to music when you write? What?

 

My preference is to play live concerts by Mark Knopfler, there’s a bunch of them on YouTube. They set a certain mood I like, and because I listen to them so often they fade into the background when I need to focus on the story. I prefer classical music for editing. Preferably Mozart, there’s a subtle precision to his work that helps me concentrate. 

 


What advice would you give someone who aspired to be a

writer?

 

For one, you’re never too old to start. I've helped folk in their sixties and seventies pick up that dream and realise it. Secondly, though talent helps, good writing doesn’t just drop onto your lap. You need to practice, edit, practice, rewrite, practice,refashion, prune, and then practice some more. This can be frustrating, just don’t give up. Persevere

 



Where could potential readers find Bleak Future, or other books of yours?

 

The best starting point would be my Amazon author page. Be aware that I sometimes write as Nils Visser, Nisse Visser, or Nils Nisse Visser. It made a lot of sense at the time, but now just causes mystery and confusion.

 

I’m adding the UK link as it’s more extensive for some reasonalthough Bleak Future isn’t registered because I confused Amazon by also listing Julie Gorringe as contributor, but if you search for The Flying Dutchman Bleak Future itll pop up.

 

With regard to Bleak Future, I commissioned a professional narrator to record a few chapters, so its entirely possible to meet Liselotte on YouTube without any further obligations. Theres also a video with an overview of illustrations from 1646 to 2022. Do give it a try! 

 


Do you have some links for us to follow you? 

Amazon Author Page: Amazon.co.uk: Nils Nisse Visser: books, biography, latest update

 

Sample chapters Bleak Future: THE DROWNED LAND OF REIMERSWAAL (Flying Dutchman Trilogy by Nils Visser. Ft. Yvette Boertje) (youtube.com)

 

Overview illustrations 1646 to 2022: THE FLYING DUTCHMAN LEGACY (Vliegende Hollander Fliegende Holländer Vaisseau Fantôme) (youtube.com)

 

 

 

 









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